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Jonathan Hadinger's avatar

I love this poem. The meter helps the readability, and gives it a quick flow that matches the speed of the narrator's anxious (stressed?) thoughts.

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Timothy Nisly's avatar

🫂 And (hopefully?) going increasingly off meter amplifies the anxiety. At least that's what I tell myself.

When do we get the Hadinger substack??

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Jonathan Hadinger's avatar

Not at least until my wife gets another poem ;)

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