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All Things Sweet

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All Things Sweet

A poem

Timothy Nisly
Feb 13, 2023
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Happy Monday šŸ¤

Friday marked one year since I logged onto Substack and created an account! (It took another six or seven weeks to actually post.) As always, thank you for being here.

For those who subscribed in the last two weeks, welcome. I post every Monday at 8AM with the following schedule:

  • 1st week - essay

  • 2nd week - poem

  • 3rd week - essay

  • 4th week - the links

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This week’s poem was inspired by the neighborhood where I run. Ironically, it slipped from my mind that my time in Florida is ending all too soon.

green coconut trees during daytime
Photo by Sebastien Gabriel on Unsplash

All Things Sweet

Reaching palm leaf, foe of death
Ne’er to take a final breath
Toxic air you trade for freeĀ 
Long as we stay ā€˜bove the sea
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Creaking palm branch under stressĀ 
Find support and coalesce
If you from your service fall
Yet your brother fills the call
 
Juicy palm drupes bunched aroundĀ 
Answer prayer and touch the ground
Steal away with zero traceĀ 
Save for stains upon my face
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Fungal palm stem, plagued alive
Answer me the reason why
All things sweet must come to end
Wish I’d paid attention when

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Magnus Hvidtfeldt
Writes The Meandering Mind
Feb 18

Lovely!

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Jonathan
Feb 13

I'm surprised at how light the mood of this poem feels, even with so much dark and foreboding language used throughout. It creates the perfect contrast for the ending.

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